Dreaming of the Sea | Photoยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble

The Poet of the Week for the W3 Poetry Prompt #221 is Selma Martin. Her prompt was to write a triolet, so I wrote two: Dreaming of the Sea and A Summer Melody. Click below to read the full prompt guidelines.

Selmaโ€™s prompt: Letโ€™s write a summer triolet

Summer is hot, sticky, noisy, meltyโ€”and perfect for a poem that keeps coming back around.

This week, letโ€™s write a triolet: a playful eight-line poem built from repetition and rhyme.

[Read more about the form here]

The rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB.

The first line repeats as lines four and seven, and the second line returns as the final line. Only two end-rhymes are used throughout, so the poem loops back on itself like a summer thought you cannot quite shake.

Choose one of these summer moments:

  • An ice cream cone melting faster than you can eat it
    My ice cream cone begins to melt
  • The shock of jumping into a freezing swimming pool
    I leapt into the icy pool
  • A mosquito staging a one-insect concert beside your ear
    A tiny buzz beside my ear
  • The joy of biting into a cold slice of watermelon
    The sweetest slice of summer fruit

Or choose any summer theme you like: sunburn, sand in your shoes, a stubborn fan, a sudden storm, a lazy afternoon, or the glorious discovery of air-conditioning.

Stay in the shade, keep something cold nearby, and happy writing!

I thoroughly enjoyed writing to this prompt. Although my first instinct was to write a diatribe about the excessive summer heat weโ€™re currently enduring, the poems had other ideas. They quietly turned themselves into two little summer songs, which I hope youโ€™ll enjoy.

The image shows a digital ink drawing of a young woman lounging beneath an old oak tree โ€” and to the left of the illustration is the text for the triolet poem, Dreaming of the Sea. Poem and drawing are by Lesley Scoble, July 2026
Dreaming of the Sea | Poem and illustrationยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble
Dreaming of the Sea | Lyrics, Sound Design and Editingยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble

Summer Melody | Poem and illustrationยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble
Summer Melody | Lyrics, Sound Design and Editingยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble

NOTES

I wrote Dreaming of the Sea first because Iโ€™m always dreaming of the sea, especially when itโ€™s as unbearably hot as it is at present.

A Summer Melody is inspired by a favourite old song, โ€œGet a Little Sand Between Your Toes,โ€ written by Tony Macaulay for the 1977 series of Seaside Special. My brother was a dancer with The New Edition on the programme and sang on the record. Iโ€™ve always loved that joyful, carefree, summery song, and writing this triolet brought those happy memories back.

You can listen to the old recording on YouTube.



Acknowledgements

Thank you, Selma, for an inspiring prompt โ€” I thoroughly enjoyed the challenge.
Thank you, as always, David, W3 weekly poetry prompt, and for your steady poetic enthusiasm and encouragement.
Credit to Tony Macaulay for the line โ€˜Get a Little Sand Between your Toesโ€™.
And finally, thank you, dear reader, for being here. ๐Ÿ™


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40 responses to “Dreaming of the Sea โ€” two triolets + songs ๐ŸŽถ”

  1. Wonderful Triolets, Lesley! You did capture the longing for the cooling sea and the joy of going to the beach! Bravo!

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    1. Thank you so much, Muri โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ xxx

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      1. You are very welcome!

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  2. not one but two. Stupendous. So cool. Thanks, Lesley. Xo

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    1. Enormous thanks, Selma ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’“
      โ€˜Twas a really cool prompt. ๐Ÿ˜Žxx

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  3. I heard the UK temperatures were on the rise again, Lesley. Two lovely poems ๐Ÿ’™๐ŸŒŠ๐Ÿ’ง๐Ÿ’ฆ

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    1. Thanks, Robbie ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’“
      Iโ€™m in fear of what the weather forecasters threaten for next week โ€” but they said weโ€™d have rain todayโ€ฆ but where was itโ€ฝ Letโ€™s hope the forecast for above 40ยฐ is as incorrect.

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      1. It is the humidity you need to watch. The combination of high temperatures and high humidity can be very dangerous. You must use at least fans to help your body cool down.

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      2. Thanks, Robbie. We have multiple fans whirring ๐Ÿ˜Žxxx

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  4. Two awesome poems. I feel that sand between my toes.

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    1. Thank you so much, Sally ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ๏ธ๐Ÿฉด

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  5. You’ve captured that summer feel!

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    1. Thank you, Heather ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜Ž

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      1. You’re welcome.

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      2. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’“

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  6. Lesley, I like how your two triolets move from the summer heat to happy childhood memories of the beach.

    ~David

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    1. Merci, beaucoup, maestro ๐Ÿ™

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      1. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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  7. I love both Lesley- I certainly can feel the sand between my toes – Iโ€™m lucky as I live close to the sea and itโ€™s a joy to feel that sea breeze when itโ€™s so hot! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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    1. O you are so lucky! Always been a dream of mine to live by the sea. Thank you for your compliment Ange โ€” much appreciated ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ’—

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      1. Stay cool Lesley ๐Ÿ’œ

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  8. These are both wonderful. I love the sand between the toes โค๏ธ

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  9. Beautiful poems, Lesley. The music pieces were perfect companions. 40c is a little dose of hell.. I hope you’re avoiding the heat, Lesley.

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    1. Thank you so much, Nigel. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’“
      No, not managing to escape the heat, Iโ€™m afraid. ๐Ÿ˜• Itโ€™s awful โ€” expected to get hotter tomorrow. I hope 40 degrees doesnโ€™t happen. They forecast rain last weekend which didnโ€™t happen โ€” so letโ€™s hope it doesnโ€™t get as hot as they say it will. Iโ€™m going to emigrate to Iceland. You must be pretty warm where you are โ€” how do you cope?

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      1. Yesh its scorching hot in south FL. I stay indoors. If I go to exercise its at 4am when the sun isnt up..but its still in the 30s at that hr sometimes

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      2. This time of year, the AC is on full throttle.

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      3. My son lives two minutes away and has AC โ€” heโ€™s seeing a lot of me lately ๐Ÿ˜‚

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      4. ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ he’s a wise man. My light hill is through the rough during the summer months. If its windy, I can get by with just the ceiling fans. But it’s a furnace this week.

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      5. Keep cool, dear friend ๐Ÿ’™ xxx

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  10. hi, Lesleyโฃ๏ธ

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Matt Snyder, is live until next Monday (Aug. 3):

    W3 Prompt #222: Weaโ€™ve Written Weekly

    Much love,
    David

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  11. Love both the poems

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    1. โ˜บ๏ธ Iโ€™m well chuffed. Thanks, Sadje xx

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      1. Youโ€™re very welcome dear friend

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      2. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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  12. i’m feeling nostalgia now, better get me to a beach!

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