Any one of us can be just two steps away from homelessness: two changes in circumstance can destabilise what appeared to be a stable and secure life โ€” family breakdown, job loss, bereavement, a mentalโ€‘health crisis.

A personal story, ending in the night I met the love of my life in the pub.


Again | Performed by AI Singer | Lyrics, Sound Design and Editingยฉ๏ธLesley Scoble

Acknowledgements

My poem and song were written to Davidโ€™s W3 Poetry Prompt #224. Please read the full prompt guidelines below.

Davidโ€™s prompt: The first time, again

Sometimes life changes enough that something familiar becomes new again.

Think of something you have experienced in the past, are experiencing now, or imagine experiencing in the future: doing an ordinary thing you have done many times before, but under changed circumstances that make it feel like a first time.

It might be the first meal in a new home, the first holiday after someone is gone, the first date after a long relationship, the first day back at work, the first time returning somewhere after many years, the first night alone, the first journey homeโ€”or something entirely different.

Write a poem about experiencing something familiar as though it were happening for the first time again.

Your poem must include the word โ€œagain.โ€

My undying thanks to the maestro poet, David Bogomolny, this weekโ€™s brilliant Poetโ€‘ofโ€‘theโ€‘Week and gracious host for W3 Prompt #224. Thank you โ€˜againโ€™ for your constant enthusiasm, poetic encouragement, and inspiration.

And my heartfelt thanks to you, the reader, for stopping by. I truly appreciate you being here.


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31 responses to “Again: free-verse narrative poem and folk song ๐ŸŽถ”

  1. This is a bit different from your usual style. Nicely done ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ’ž

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    1. Thanks, Robbie. Iโ€™m enjoying playing around with enjambment ๐Ÿ˜ and aiming for minimalism. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’—

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      1. Itโ€™s great ๐Ÿงก

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      2. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’—xxx

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  2. A very human and moving poem. I love how it transforms difficult moments into a new opportunity to start again. Sometimes, after so much wandering, life surprises us with a place and a person who make us feel at home. ๐ŸŒท

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    1. Muchรญsimas gracias, amiga mia. ๐Ÿ™ I truly appreciate your thoughtful comments. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— Lifeโ€™s surprises make life interesting. You never know what may turn up. ๐Ÿ˜

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      1. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿซ‚๐Ÿ˜Š

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      2. ๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’—

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  3. Deeply moving, lovely poem, Lesley. ๐Ÿฅฐ

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    1. Thank you, Nancy ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’—xx

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  4. Lesley, youโ€™ve used the prompt effectively here. The progression from homelessness and wandering to meeting someone who becomes home works as a narrative arc. The minimal enjambment and line breaks create rhythm. The audio accompaniment adds another dimension to the work. ๐Ÿ’™

    Love & Hugs
    Khadija ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿค—

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    1. Enormous thanks, Khadija. I appreciate your comment so much. ๐Ÿ™ hugs back ๐Ÿค—

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  5. this is so good Leslie! I really enjoyed it! ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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    1. Thanks so much, Carol Anne ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’– hugs

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  6. Great poem, Lesley!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)

    yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you so much, Yvette! ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’—xxx

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  7. Lesley, it’s wonderful when the choices we make turn out to be pure gold!! A delightful poem!!

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    1. Thank you, Muri! I love the happy unexpected ๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ

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  8. Wonderful story Lesley

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    1. Thank you, Sadje ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’—

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      1. Youโ€™re most welcome โ™ฅ๏ธ

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  9. What a delicious poem Lesley I love it and my meeting my hubby was very similar- a friend and decided to go to town very late, little money and we both met the men we married – fate eh๐Ÿ™Œ

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    1. How marvellous, Ange! Iโ€™m thrilled we have that in common. Isnโ€™t Fate wonderful. โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ And weโ€™ve been together for a VERY long time and I wouldnโ€™t change a minute. xxx

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      1. Me neither ๐Ÿ™Œ

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      2. โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ’•

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  10. Excellent, Lesley. I love how your poem shows that home was not really a place, but the person who made an ordinary night at the pub feel like a new beginning.

    ~David

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  11. Hi, Lesleyโฃ๏ธ

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Judy, is now live until Monday, Aug. 24:

    W3 Prompt #225: Weaโ€™ve Written Weekly

    Much love,
    David

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  12. hi, Lesleyโฃ๏ธ

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Michelle, is now live until Monday, August 31st:

    W3 Prompt #226: Weaโ€™ve Written Weekly

    Much love,
    David

    P.S. How are you? How is your hip?

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      1. ๐Ÿค—๐ŸŒน

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