The POW (poet of the week) for the W3 We’ave Weekly Poetry Prompt this week is Melissa Lemay.

Melissa’s Prompt GuidelinesChoose one of the two paintings below and construct a poem of any form, using the artwork as inspiration and incorporating the colours shown.
Over the Town and The Big Wheel by Marc Chagall

I love paintings by Marc Chagall. He is a painter of dreams. My choice of painting for the inspiration for my poem, HIGH AS A KITE, is Chagall’s painting, Over the Town.

High as a Kite

I’m flying high as a kite
Right up high
in the sky
so far up
I’m out of sight
I’ve never been at this altitude before
I’m only 5 foot in height
and like being close to the floor

Am I in a dream?
Have I been taken?
Should I scream?
Am I mistaken?

Why am I here?
What am I doing?
I’ve got vertigo
and fear
I shall fall
It’s a hell of a drop
I’m in a bit of a strop
And perplexed by it all.

Is that russet Dorset, or a town in Devon
we’re flying over?
or is it Dover?

Kevin, go any higher, mate
and you and I might 
end up in blue Heaven
Why are we flying?
I wish we’d driven
(not keen on dying)
Instead of this floating
I’d rather go boating
It’s all very well
WAFT-ING with the clouds
In a colourful dream
of red and blue
and green and cream
But,
I prefer feet on the ground
Safe and sound
On solid brown Earth
Take me back
Quick!
I feel rather sick
I’m turning green
Come back tomorrow 
have a rest in between 
take me home
there’s a good fellow
my house is down there
the one where the shutters are yellow.
Kevin mutters, okay
we’ve wafted enough for today.

Lesley Scoble, May 2023

My thanks to David, W3 Weekly Poetry Prompt, as always for his encouragement and inspiration.
Thank you, Poet of the Week, Melissa Lemay for this enjoyable prompt.


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52 responses to “High as a Kite: a poem of any form”

  1. Love your fun poem Lesley.

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    1. 😁 Thanks, Sadje 🙏

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  2. This is magical and whimsical

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    1. Thank you very much, Mich ✨😊✨

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  3. this is lovely, Lesley.
    just keeps flowing and so well too😁🤍

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    1. Oh, thank you so much, Destiny 😊🙏 for this compliment 🌹

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      1. my pleasure ✨

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  4. Kevin… You sure you got his name right 😝🤣 Hope he had a licence.

    A fun but scary adventure, Lesley. That Kevin! I highly doubt he was wafting… by the way, why did you italicize wafting, when you used it the first time?

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    1. Interesting question, Tanmay. I italicised it in the hope to be more expansive and theatrical. I might normalise it. I’m glad you mentioned it. I think now it is unnecessary.
      btw, Kevin enjoys wafting.

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      1. I get it now… Some things are lost on me, until explained.

        Kevin looks like he is getting ready to really go in the painting! I guess, looks can be deceiving.

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      2. I appreciate you mentioning the italics. They were wrong. They are on the cutting room floor.

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      3. WAFT—TING is more what I was trying to say 😂

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      4. That’s really good 👍

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      5. shall I put it in? 🤓

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      6. 😄 okay, here I go

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    2. I de-italicised it. Better methinks. Thanks, Tanmay

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      1. But waft is such a dreamy word. It deserves more! I like how you try so many different aspects into your poems, but sometimes too subtle.

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      2. subtle is my middle name

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      3. Not, Agnes? I mean Elizabeth, I mean Claire… 😂 Sorry, couldn’t resist!

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      4. 🤣 Percy, you should know by now that it is Clare

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      5. Oops 😬 There’s an extra I in there 👁️

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      6. My nickname is Lizzy

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      7. I wasn’t that far off with Elizabeth then. Dizzy Lizzy! Now you’ve got me in the mood for The Beatles. It was Eric Johnson earlier, with your mention of Dover in the poem.

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      8. 😄 I prefer busy lizzie 🤓
        Oh, Eric Johnson… I’ll have a listen

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      9. He is not everyone’s cup of tea.

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      10. His guitar is sublime 🎸 and I want his jacket.

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  5. Oh no, never wafted enuff, …never say that Lesley, …followed every loop and twirl, …marvellous tale of flying high, into the sky, here and there, not a care, .. … enjoyed it so much, …✨👏✨🌹✨

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  6. “Why are we flying?
    I wish we’d driven”

    “Kevin mutters, okay
    we’ve wafted enough for today”

    I love this. Your poem is so much fun.😊
    I’m stuck on the name Kevin. As soon as I read it, I laughed.

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    1. Haha! Melissa,
      It took me ages to find a word to rhyme with Kevin—so I came up with Heaven. 😉
      So very glad you enjoyed it 💗😊

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  7. This sort of reminds me of the time we tried the brown acid at Woodstock even though we were warned not to take it. Good memories!
    Love your poetry, Lesley, high as a kite or not!
    Now I have that song from Mary Poppins stuck in my head! 😊

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    1. Thank you, Nancy, 🙏😊
      Happy to awaken good memories and and stick songs in your head. Oh no, now you’ve put Mary Poppins in my head! 😂
      Appreciate your compliment very much,
      Bert 🌹

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  8. Kevin is the perfect name and I love the silliness and mild destress in the poem.

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    1. Thank you, Nicole 🌹
      I think Kevin may have to appear again!
      😊🙏

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  9. I adore your poems, Lesley – they’re so unique!

    Love this:

    I’ve got vertigo
    and fear
    I shall fall
    It’s a hell of a drop

    hahahaHA!


    David

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  10. Love your interpretation of this painting, Lesley! I was there every step of the way 🙂

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  11. Lesley you perfectly tapped into my fear of heights! It is hard to enjoy the marvel of flight when you are afraid to look down!

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    1. Fear of heights is awful. Do you freeze like me?
      Sorry to put you through it 😁💕

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  13. Wow! Such a creative piece – great really get a sense of your passion for Chagall’s work in your poem.
    I am also a fan of this artist and love his application of paints as well as subject matters and compositions. Quite surrealist – especially this one you studied.

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    1. Thank you, CSK,
      😊🌹🙏

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  14. I always love a poem with questions. There are so many of them. (K)

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  15. Lesley,

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the creative Braden of Caffeinated Philosophy, is now live!

    W3 Prompt #58: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy ❤

    ~David

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    1. Many thanks, David ☕️

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