This week’s W3 Poetry Prompt (#199) comes from Elizabeth, who is wearing the Poet‑of‑the‑Week laurels (read her winning haiga poem here). She invites us to write a sonnet—either in the Petrarchan or Shakespearean form—to express love for ourselves.

I set out to write a Shakespearean sonnet—but it seems to have turned into something more like a modern sonnet after Shakespeare. I’ve kept the fourteen-line structure, the ABAB CDCD EFEF GG rhyme scheme, and the ten syllables per line, but my iambic metres appear to wander off whenever they please. If, perchance, you come across any of them, do send them home.

In the meantime, I’m pleased to present—not quite a Shakespearean sonnet—but my first Scoblean sonnet. I hope it gives you a bit of a laugh.

Love Number One | Digital ink and watercolour©️Lesley Scoble

Narrated by me.

Although sonnet means “little song,” it wasn’t originally intended to be sung. It began as an intimate poem, crafted to be spoken aloud or read quietly from the page. So here I am, not singing the words, but giving them voice.

I hope you enjoy this interpretation.

Love Number One, written and narrated by Lesley Scoble

THANK YOU

My thanks as always, to David Bogomolny, for hosting his inspirational poetry platform.
My thanks to Elizabeth for her love yourself sonnet prompt. I am so grateful for the inspiration.
And my thanks to you, dear reader, for spending time with me.


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49 responses to “Love Number One: A Sonnet to Myself (And Narration)”

  1. Wow! I loved your reading of the poem. It was so much better than when I read it 😊

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    1. Gosh, thank you so much for reading it, Smitha. I’d love to listen to your rendition—I bet it’s wonderful. 🙏🌹
      (Sorry, I accidentally duplicated my reply on your site. Doh 🙄)

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  2. As always my experience was so heightened by getting to listen to you read it to me. There is a lot to love about you, Lesley- and I am glad your self gets it!

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    1. Violet, this is such a lovely thing to say. Thank you so much — I’m truly humbled.

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  3. A wonderful sonnet Lesley and I loved your audio version brilliant 🤩

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    1. Thanks so much, AJ ☺️💕

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  4. I absolutely loved this! You write so well with humour. Iambic Pentameter is overrated…I, too, took poetic license on that.

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    1. I’m so happy you liked it, Heather. Looking forward to reading yours—great minds think alike so they say 😁

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  5. What’s not to love about this sonnet, dear Lesley! There’s so much to love about you, especially your excellent reading! 🙇🏼‍♀️💝🤗🥰

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    1. Aw, shucks, Punam. Thank you so very much. 😘

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      1. Always a pleasure, Lesley. 🥰

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  6. A delight Lesley! And it is often very difficult to love others – warts and all.

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    1. Thank you, Muri! 😊💕

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  7. Oh, Lesley! I love to listen to your beautiful voice reading the poem. Scoblean sonnet, perfect form! Indeed number 1, star, sun and moon!

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    1. Thank you so very much for this compliment, Elizabeth. Youv’e made my day! 🙏🤗

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  8. Brilliant Lesley, I can imagine you on a stage taking a bow with this, love the reading 💞

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    1. 🙇‍♀️ I thank you most kindly, Suzanne 🙇‍♀️

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  9. A funny and sarcastic poem about self-love. With humor and a touch of irony, it questions the idea of ​​”love yourself,” taking it almost to the extreme. The exaggerated imagery—flowers, serenades, comparing oneself to a hero—brings smiles but also invites reflection on how we see and speak to ourselves.

    Light in tone, but with an interesting underlying theme of self-esteem and vanity.

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    1. Gracias Lincol — me alegra que el humor y la exageración te hayan llegado. Es divertido llevar “quiérete” al extremo y descubrir que, entre las risas, también aparece un poquito de verdad.

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      1. Gracias a ti por esa forma tan inteligente de decirlo. El humor tiene ese poder maravilloso: nos hace reír… y cuando bajamos la guardia, nos deja una verdad sembrada en el corazón. Llevar el “quiérete” al extremo fue brillante, porque entre la exageración y la risa se cuela algo muy auténtico.

        Un gusto leerte y descubrir esas capas entre líneas. 🤗😊

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      2. Lincol, Muchísimas gracias por tus palabras tan generosas y sensibles. Me alegra profundamente que el poema te haya llegado así, entre la risa, la exageración y esa verdad que a veces se cuela sin avisar.
        Aprecio de corazón la atención con la que lo leíste y la belleza de tu respuesta.
        Un gusto enorme encontrarte entre líneas. 😊💗xxx

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      3. Qué regalo leer tus palabras… Gracias a ti por escribir con esa mezcla tan humana de humor y verdad, que nos desarma casi sin darnos cuenta. Cuando un poema logra colarse así, suave pero hondo, es porque está vivo.

        Me alegra mucho que hayas sentido mi lectura cercana; fue sincera y nacida de la admiración. El gusto es mutuo: encontrarte entre líneas es de esas coincidencias que enriquecen. Un abrazo grande y agradecido. 🤗🌷🫂

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      4. Lincol, tus palabras me conmueven y me honran de verdad. Te doy las gracias de corazón. ❤️

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      5. Gracias a ti por recibir mis palabras con tanto cariño. Me alegra mucho saber que llegaron a tu corazón 🤗🌼❤️

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      6. ❤️❤️❤️xxx

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  10. Made me smile.

    A nice bit of fun.

    Not right though.

    I am number one!

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    1. Haha! Aren’t delusion and fantasy wonderful things.

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  11. Oh I love your poem Lesley. You’ve done a fantastic job of writing a sonnet

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    1. Thank you so much, dear Sadje 💕

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      1. You’re very welcome ☺️

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  12. I think we could all learn from this – giving ourselves a big fat kiss 💋. And you have invented another form! Love the art work too.

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    1. 😁 Thank you, Marion. We should all love ourselves more. I don’t think I can claim another form—unless it’s called a mucked-up sonnet. 😂

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  13. Lesley, I laughed at “pretend he’s Brad Pitt — or someone like that.” That wink feels so unmistakably you.

    ~David

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    1. Merci beaucoup, mon ami 🤗💖xxx

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      1. Reçus, ces gros bisous — et les miens voyagent vers toi.

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  14. you’ve inspired me to serenade myself, but I’m not sure I’m up for doing so on the balcony quite yet

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    1. Haha! Artie! Try it! It’s a laugh. 😂 Thanks for your fun comment. 🙏

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  15. hi, Lesley❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Christine, is live until Monday (tomorrow):

    W3 Prompt #200: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy!

    Much love,
    David

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