This week’s W3 Poetry Prompt (#199) comes from Elizabeth, who is wearing the Poet‑of‑the‑Week laurels (read her winning haiga poem here). She invites us to write a sonnet—either in the Petrarchan or Shakespearean form—to express love for ourselves.

I set out to write a Shakespearean sonnet—but it seems to have turned into something more like a modern sonnet after Shakespeare. I’ve kept the fourteen-line structure, the ABAB CDCD EFEF GG rhyme scheme, and the ten syllables per line, but my iambic metres appear to wander off whenever they please. If, perchance, you come across any of them, do send them home.

In the meantime, I’m pleased to present—not quite a Shakespearean sonnet—but my first Scoblean sonnet. I hope it gives you a bit of a laugh.

Love Number One | Digital ink and watercolour©️Lesley Scoble

Narrated by me.

Although sonnet means “little song,” it wasn’t originally intended to be sung. It began as an intimate poem, crafted to be spoken aloud or read quietly from the page. So here I am, not singing the words, but giving them voice.

I hope you enjoy this interpretation.

Love Number One, written and narrated by Lesley Scoble

THANK YOU

My thanks as always, to David Bogomolny, for hosting his inspirational poetry platform.
My thanks to Elizabeth for her love yourself sonnet prompt. I am so grateful for the inspiration.
And my thanks to you, dear reader, for spending time with me.


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10 responses to “Love Number One: A Sonnet to Myself (And Narration)”

  1. Wow! I loved your reading of the poem. It was so much better than when I read it 😊

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    1. Gosh, thank you so much for reading it, Smitha. I’d love to listen to your rendition—I bet it’s wonderful. 🙏🌹
      (Sorry, I accidentally duplicated my reply on your site. Doh 🙄)

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  2. As always my experience was so heightened by getting to listen to you read it to me. There is a lot to love about you, Lesley- and I am glad your self gets it!

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    1. Violet, this is such a lovely thing to say. Thank you so much — I’m truly humbled.

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  3. A wonderful sonnet Lesley and I loved your audio version brilliant 🤩

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  4. I absolutely loved this! You write so well with humour. Iambic Pentameter is overrated…I, too, took poetic license on that.

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  5. What’s not to love about this sonnet, dear Lesley! There’s so much to love about you, especially your excellent reading! 🙇🏼‍♀️💝🤗🥰

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  6. A delight Lesley! And it is often very difficult to love others – warts and all.

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  7. Oh, Lesley! I love to listen to your beautiful voice reading the poem. Scoblean sonnet, perfect form! Indeed number 1, star, sun and moon!

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