Written in response to Sadje’s #Whatdoyousee Photo Prompt #328. The photo is by Daniil Silentav.
Thank you, Sadje for the beautiful inspiration.
And thank you, dear reader, for spending time with my poem.


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25 responses to “Winter Bullfinch: Free Verse Poem”

    1. Aw, thank you, Robbie. xx

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    1. Thank you so much, Heather. xx

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      1. You’re welcome.

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  1. S)He is so beautiful and your verse seals the deal.

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  2. Perfect accompaniment to the photo!! I love these lines “he’s perched up high/on denuded twigs of/grey”!

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    1. So pleased you like that line, Muri. Thank you!

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  3. I love this lovely poem Lesley. How beautifully it flows. Thanks for joining in

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    1. Aw, thank you, Sadje. Your words mean a lot to me. I wanted the poem to be as bare as possible—I stripped a great deal out of it. My pleasure to join in—thanks for having me

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      1. You’re very welcome dear friend

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  4. A delicate and visual poem that beautifully portrays winter and the small resistance of life, showing how the color and presence of the bird illuminate the cold of the day.

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  5. He is a puffed up little fellow. I am sure he would appreciate your literal interpretation of his winter portrait.

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  6. This is so good. Immaculate imagery, Lesley.

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    1. I humbly thank you, my kind friend.

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      1. You’re welcome, Lesley

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  7. I love his scarlet robe.

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  8. “red berriesgrace the bushlike scarlet pearls”

    Gorgeous writing, Lesley!

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    1. Thank you so much, Sara. How kind you are. 💖

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  9. Beautiful imagery Lesley 💕

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    1. Enormous thanks, Ange 🤗

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